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If In The Morning You Are Breathing

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If In The Morning You Are Breathing…   

Terror, Love, terror—
Each night, asleep.
Fearing no bad dreams, no—
Yet the unsettling is complete.

For if I close my eyes,
And you, you do not wake--
Wasting every breath I keep--
And you somehow have escaped;
This realm, this realm that holds your soul:
If in the morning you are not whole,
T'would be no miner leap:
I would with you withdraw--
And draw no breath
And make no speech.

So Love, here, hear me beseech:
Let us each settle down in gentle
Let our repose crawl and creep;
And when the morning finally dawns
Let the sunlight be replete:
With you, with you Love--
Breathing,
Sound
And
Deep.

As both we know
Breathing
Is no unaccomplished feat
Take the air, draw in the air
And forever it repeat.
My husband is not well, and these thoughts keep going through my mind---what if I wake up tomorrow and he no longer breathes?
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Haladran's avatar
I don't mean to sound clichéd, but I was hooked. A strong mix of yearning and fear, and the very clear emotion accentuates the tone throughout: this is the way I wish I could write!

You have my prayers also, you both deserve happiness and health and I wish both will make a home with you permanently.